Talk:Ghost Platoon

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Ghost Platoon

Keith, I love it. There were a few spelling and punctuation errors, and one reference to Tom as a lieutenant rather than a Sargent; but other than that, its great, honestly, you have the beginnings of a decent novel. -- Bruce

"The Magister 23:34, 26 December 2014 (MST)"