Talk:An Apprentice's Travel Diary

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An Apprentice's Travel Diary

Excellent writing on the awakening of Ostanes.

Merci beaucoup -- "The Magister 20:41, 20 March 2018 (MDT)"

As you continue to write you make me feel like I failed to tell the story you unfold...I skimmed the edges, hinted at things that you are filling in beautifully, your dream sequence is fascinating and in line with the story I told. You are making some small writing errors, but it's all spelling and grammar at this point. Please don't be offended if I clean it a little as I come across those missteps. Your writing is enthralling. Keith 19:10, 26 March 2018

I have suggested he write fiction as a additional hobby. I enjoy his writing. Brian 13:43, 27 March 2018

-) -- "The Magister 18:54, 27 March 2018 (MDT)"