Talk:The Windy City in Spring
Superb! Keep it coming. Its all there inside you. Just pour it out and let the vampire live again. -- "The Magister 21:04, 23 October 2016 (MDT)"
The scene you edited are better written and reflect the Marcel that I have been trying to portray. He might be a devil, but he is a genial devil. -- "The Magister 18:19, 2 November 2016 (MDT)"
"Looking for a Bite to Eat" was a nice piece of work. I have yet to read further, but I look forward to it. -- "The Magister 17:48, 9 November 2016 (MST)"
The story is spooling out nicely, you manage to keep the pace quick and the voice of Tremen is clear as a bell. -- "The Magister 22:25, 11 November 2016 (MST)"
Thank you. I am trying to keep it that way without dropping things. I had to get my mind right to write the last couple of chapters. I struggle with Son, and his evil. You have done a good job telling that story. Keith, 9:16, 12 November, 2016 MST
Its nice to see you working on this again. Tremen is a deep character, deeper I think that the faces he has thus far shown us. But I think as we push his story forward, we will see the man beneath the masks. Good work, Keith. -- "The Magister 20:54, 18 September 2017 (MDT)"
Today's update was inspiring, I rather enjoyed it. Its the all too human side of Tremen, it makes him believable. Excellent. -- "The Magister 19:13, 21 September 2017 (MDT)"
With each addition, your story gets just a little bit better. Before long, you and Jim Butcher will be doing book signings together. -- "The Magister 23:36, 4 October 2017 (MDT)"
