Difference between revisions of "Talk:History According to Aegon Nightshade"
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I settle down to read your writing with such interest...well done my friend. '''Keith 12/7/2018, 01:05 MST''' | I settle down to read your writing with such interest...well done my friend. '''Keith 12/7/2018, 01:05 MST''' | ||
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Your writing is as always superb. You capture the other-worldliness of Astarte and Niflheim in a way that evokes a chill, no pun intended. I cleaned up a couple spelling mistakes...and I think clarified your meaning in one place. If I got it wrong and you don't like it, by all means fix it. '''Keith, 20:25 MST 1/28/2018''' | Your writing is as always superb. You capture the other-worldliness of Astarte and Niflheim in a way that evokes a chill, no pun intended. I cleaned up a couple spelling mistakes...and I think clarified your meaning in one place. If I got it wrong and you don't like it, by all means fix it. '''Keith, 20:25 MST 1/28/2018''' | ||
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Excellent as always. Mist Guide 13:40, 11 August 2019 (MDT) | Excellent as always. Mist Guide 13:40, 11 August 2019 (MDT) | ||
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Keep up the good work. Mist Guide 01:06, 1 October 2019 (MDT) | Keep up the good work. Mist Guide 01:06, 1 October 2019 (MDT) | ||
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Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written. Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming. Nice introduction of a group of TWADs. You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them. Excellent insight on Sender. '''Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)''' | Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written. Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming. Nice introduction of a group of TWADs. You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them. Excellent insight on Sender. '''Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)''' | ||
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Kurra Varos promises to be a great chapter...feel like a damn junkie waiting to see how you write it up. No pressure! '''Mist Guide 05:40, 21 December 2019 (MST)''' | Kurra Varos promises to be a great chapter...feel like a damn junkie waiting to see how you write it up. No pressure! '''Mist Guide 05:40, 21 December 2019 (MST)''' | ||
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| + | My goal as always is to entertain and your criticism, positive or negative helps refine my writing style, so thank you for the pressure needed to improve and the feedback that is vital to perfecting the art. -- "The Magister 11:44, 21 December 2019 (MST)" | ||
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Revision as of 11:44, 21 December 2019
I settle down to read your writing with such interest...well done my friend. Keith 12/7/2018, 01:05 MST
Your writing is as always superb. You capture the other-worldliness of Astarte and Niflheim in a way that evokes a chill, no pun intended. I cleaned up a couple spelling mistakes...and I think clarified your meaning in one place. If I got it wrong and you don't like it, by all means fix it. Keith, 20:25 MST 1/28/2018
Excellent as always. Mist Guide 13:40, 11 August 2019 (MDT)
Keep up the good work. Mist Guide 01:06, 1 October 2019 (MDT)
Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written. Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming. Nice introduction of a group of TWADs. You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them. Excellent insight on Sender. Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)
Kurra Varos promises to be a great chapter...feel like a damn junkie waiting to see how you write it up. No pressure! Mist Guide 05:40, 21 December 2019 (MST)
My goal as always is to entertain and your criticism, positive or negative helps refine my writing style, so thank you for the pressure needed to improve and the feedback that is vital to perfecting the art. -- "The Magister 11:44, 21 December 2019 (MST)"
