Difference between revisions of "Talk:Windows Into the Fair"
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''Its good to see you writing again. Windows Into the Fair is very enlightening for those of us who play within that part of the game and its nice to see another side of the story.'' -- "The Magister 20:37, 21 December 2019 (MST)" | ''Its good to see you writing again. Windows Into the Fair is very enlightening for those of us who play within that part of the game and its nice to see another side of the story.'' -- "The Magister 20:37, 21 December 2019 (MST)" | ||
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Latest revision as of 16:21, 31 December 2019
Excellent work Keith, an alternate version of events that illustrates how differently and yet similarly people perceive things. The flow of it smooth, almost sinuous and your antiquated phrasing is a nice bit of medieval culture to add to the ripe stew that is the Pageant. The first person account makes me feel as though I know Eben a bit, but it is our first introduction. I envy how quickly and flawlessly you put words to page, it was never so easy for me. -- "The Magister 21:24, 9 October 2019 (MDT)"
An interesting twist, here you break from the original narrative to explore Theodoric's more nebulous stratagems and the people he uses to accomplish those ends. A good start to a much longer story or chapter, but the foundation is laid solidly. Where to next? -- "The Magister 20:49, 10 October 2019 (MDT)"
Its good to see you writing again. Windows Into the Fair is very enlightening for those of us who play within that part of the game and its nice to see another side of the story. -- "The Magister 20:37, 21 December 2019 (MST)"
A kickass start to a chapter and full of vigor and verve, and just a dusting of nostalgia. It looks like you have an excellent start, don't let time and life steal your momentum. -- "The Magister 16:21, 31 December 2019 (MST)"
