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Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written.  Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming.  Nice introduction of a group of TWADs.  You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them.  Excellent insight on Sender.  '''Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)'''
Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written.  Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming.  Nice introduction of a group of TWADs.  You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them.  Excellent insight on Sender.  '''Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)'''
Kurra Varos promises to be a great chapter...feel like a damn junkie waiting to see how you write it up.  No pressure! '''Mist Guide 05:40, 21 December 2019 (MST)'''

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History According to Aegon Nightshade

I settle down to read your writing with such interest...well done my friend. Keith 12/7/2018, 01:05 MST

Your writing is as always superb. You capture the other-worldliness of Astarte and Niflheim in a way that evokes a chill, no pun intended. I cleaned up a couple spelling mistakes...and I think clarified your meaning in one place. If I got it wrong and you don't like it, by all means fix it. Keith, 20:25 MST 1/28/2018

Excellent as always. Mist Guide 13:40, 11 August 2019 (MDT)

Keep up the good work. Mist Guide 01:06, 1 October 2019 (MDT)

Blijeda šuma (The Pale Forest): Grim, well written. Details are well balanced, giving a flavor, not overwhelming. Nice introduction of a group of TWADs. You make them meaningful, but don't waste time on them. Excellent insight on Sender. Mist Guide 00:52, 9 October 2019 (MDT)

Kurra Varos promises to be a great chapter...feel like a damn junkie waiting to see how you write it up. No pressure! Mist Guide 05:40, 21 December 2019 (MST)