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Revision as of 21:26, 18 July 2018
Excellent writing on the awakening of Ostanes.
Merci beaucoup -- "The Magister 20:41, 20 March 2018 (MDT)"
As you continue to write you make me feel like I failed to tell the story you unfold...I skimmed the edges, hinted at things that you are filling in beautifully, your dream sequence is fascinating and in line with the story I told. You are making some small writing errors, but it's all spelling and grammar at this point. Please don't be offended if I clean it a little as I come across those missteps. Your writing is enthralling. Keith 19:10, 26 March 2018
I have suggested he write fiction as a additional hobby. I enjoy his writing. Brian 13:43, 27 March 2018
"Smiles" -- "The Magister 18:54, 27 March 2018 (MDT)"
You are a great tease...but then that is the challenge of reading a story as it is being written. Well done my friend, you are a gifted writer. Keith 10:31, 9 May 2018
j'apprécie que --"The Magister 19:21, 9 May 2018 (MDT)"
Jeanette Corinna Victor
Basics
Gender: Feminine
Type: Child
Nationality: Dutch
Location: Gelderland, Netherlands
Language: Dutch
Life & Times
Age: 7
Birth date: May 1, 1893 (2:28 AM)
Birth Place: Apeldoorn
Physical
Height: 128 cm / 4 ft 2 in
Weight: 21.8 kg / 48.0 lbs
Handedness: Right
Hair: White Blond
Eye Color: Blue / Green
Blood type: O+
Future Outlook
Death date: August 1, 1950
Lifespan: 57
Cause of death: Cancer
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{"du berceau à la tombe"} -- "The Magister 18:35, 16 July 2018 (MDT)"
