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'''Jeanette Corinna Victor'''
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'''Basics'''
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Gender: Feminine<br>
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Type: Child<br>
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Nationality: Dutch<br>
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Location: Gelderland, Netherlands<br>
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Language: Dutch<br>
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'''Life & Times'''
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Age: 7<br>
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Birth date: May 1, 1893 (2:28 AM)<br>
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'''Physical'''
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Height: 128 cm / 4 ft 2 in<br>
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Weight: 21.8 kg / 48.0 lbs<br>
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Handedness: Right<br>
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Blood type: O+<br>
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'''Future Outlook'''
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Death date: August 1, 1950<br>
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Lifespan: 57<br>
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Cause of death: Cancer<br>

Revision as of 15:58, 16 July 2018

An Apprentice's Travel Diary

Excellent writing on the awakening of Ostanes.

Merci beaucoup -- "The Magister 20:41, 20 March 2018 (MDT)"

As you continue to write you make me feel like I failed to tell the story you unfold...I skimmed the edges, hinted at things that you are filling in beautifully, your dream sequence is fascinating and in line with the story I told. You are making some small writing errors, but it's all spelling and grammar at this point. Please don't be offended if I clean it a little as I come across those missteps. Your writing is enthralling. Keith 19:10, 26 March 2018

I have suggested he write fiction as a additional hobby. I enjoy his writing. Brian 13:43, 27 March 2018

"Smiles" -- "The Magister 18:54, 27 March 2018 (MDT)"

You are a great tease...but then that is the challenge of reading a story as it is being written. Well done my friend, you are a gifted writer. Keith 10:31, 9 May 2018

j'apprécie que --"The Magister 19:21, 9 May 2018 (MDT)"


Jeanette Corinna Victor


Basics


Gender: Feminine
Type: Child
Nationality: Dutch
Location: Gelderland, Netherlands
Language: Dutch


Life & Times Age: 7
Birth date: May 1, 1893 (2:28 AM)

Physical


Height: 128 cm / 4 ft 2 in
Weight: 21.8 kg / 48.0 lbs
Handedness: Right
Blood type: O+

Future Outlook


Death date: August 1, 1950
Lifespan: 57
Cause of death: Cancer