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| + | As you continue to write you make me feel like I failed to tell the story you unfold...I skimmed the edges, hinted at things that you are filling in beautifully, your dream sequence is fascinating and in line with the story I told. You are making some small writing errors, but it's all spelling and grammar at this point. Please don't be offended if I clean it a little as I come across those missteps. Your writing is enthralling. '''Keith 19:10, 26 March 2018''' | ||
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Excellent writing on the awakening of Ostanes.
Merci beaucoup -- "The Magister 20:41, 20 March 2018 (MDT)"
As you continue to write you make me feel like I failed to tell the story you unfold...I skimmed the edges, hinted at things that you are filling in beautifully, your dream sequence is fascinating and in line with the story I told. You are making some small writing errors, but it's all spelling and grammar at this point. Please don't be offended if I clean it a little as I come across those missteps. Your writing is enthralling. Keith 19:10, 26 March 2018
