Difference between revisions of "Talk:The Windy City in Spring"
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Revision as of 22:25, 11 November 2016
Superb! Keep it coming. Its all there inside you. Just pour it out and let the vampire live again. -- "The Magister 21:04, 23 October 2016 (MDT)"
The scene you edited are better written and reflect the Marcel that I have been trying to portray. He might be a devil, but he is a genial devil. -- "The Magister 18:19, 2 November 2016 (MDT)"
"Looking for a Bite to Eat" was a nice piece of work. I have yet to read further, but I look forward to it. -- "The Magister 17:48, 9 November 2016 (MST)"
The story is spooling out nicely, you manage to keep the pace quick and the voice of Tremen is clear as a bell. -- "The Magister 22:25, 11 November 2016 (MST)"
