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''This has great possibility.'' -- "The Magister 01:49, 8 August 2022 (MDT)"
 
''This has great possibility.'' -- "The Magister 01:49, 8 August 2022 (MDT)"
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''It is definitely getting interesting. The Cats are formed entirely of white Jade' which often has a Faint green highlight
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''After re-reading this short story I have found myself wanting to read more, to follow the FBI's SF field agents in the Demimonde that is the Worldof Darkness. You are a gifted storyteller Keith and this piece needs to be finished. Gordie and Juana and the rest of the unit are counting on you.'' -- "The Magister 00:39, 20 November 2023 (MST)"
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"Its moving right along Keith. Keep it up!" -- "The Magister 23:41, 20 November 2023 (MST)"
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The Container

This has great possibility. -- "The Magister 01:49, 8 August 2022 (MDT)"


It is definitely getting interesting. The Cats are formed entirely of white Jade' which often has a Faint green highlight


After re-reading this short story I have found myself wanting to read more, to follow the FBI's SF field agents in the Demimonde that is the Worldof Darkness. You are a gifted storyteller Keith and this piece needs to be finished. Gordie and Juana and the rest of the unit are counting on you. -- "The Magister 00:39, 20 November 2023 (MST)"


"Its moving right along Keith. Keep it up!" -- "The Magister 23:41, 20 November 2023 (MST)"